Trying out NEW THINGS!

[shiroi_ten]

I have ridiculously large pictures...be warned. I feel like I should learn html better so I don't have to click on FAQ every time to copy paste special html codes. =A=

This weekend has been greatly productive concerning my hobbies. Schoolwork, not so much. Definitely had fun baking coffeecake!!

I have trouble taking out the first slice ALWAYS. Ahh blackberries are so good! Started at around 9...and finished it with a latte and a good book!

Then went around the kinkfest and decided not to lurk so hard, so I decided to start and finish actual porn for once. I have NO IDEA what I did with the body. I have a serious urge to redraw parts...Concrit please?

jibrailis is amazing, and her fic is amazing, and I wanted to draw for that old swing fic but... >///<

REVERSE BB GUYS OMGOSH. O_________O IN LESS THAN TEN DAYS. WHUT WHUT WHUUUUUT? *headdesks*


I wish I could do like fluffy. ;__;

Comments

[neomeruru.livejournal.com]

Congratulations on breaking into honest-to-god porn! I just did too! Fun, isn't it?

I'm willing to give you some concrit! Here we go:

1. Arthur's left leg seems to taper down, losing definition in the calf, and it feels like his toes are a little too curved? Don't forget the balls of the feet! And I think you should also see his right foot, even if his right leg is curled underneath him.

2. The fucking machine would probably have a straight shaft (hee hee, shaft), take http://salonkritik.net/images/ll675x.jpg for example. And, the angle that it's going in now looks a little painful (or the dildo is small); I would probably rotate it so it went in more level, or even downwards a little (the prostate is on the anterior wall <3)

3. And this one is optional, because it works fine without it, but I would probably draw the right arm just to give more of a sense of limbs akimbo. Either pillowed under his face, or up like his left arm!

I hope that helps! I think it's really great so far. :)

[shiroi-ten.livejournal.com]

hahaha it was two and I was TOTALLY going to shade to be the other...half of him then I got caught up in god knows what.

Ah you found a picture!!! Oddly enough, finding good refs on google is a lot harder than I thought it would be.

Thank you for the advice!

[jibrailis.livejournal.com]

You are too good to me, bb, and I am always happy to look at your porn again and guhhhhhh yeah, still the same reaction guhhhhhh, nosebleed time.

and then there was fluffy and coffeecake, and if it was legal I would marry this post.

[shiroi-ten.livejournal.com]

No problem! I am so glad it turned out ok.

[adelaide-rain.livejournal.com]

Hnnngh that porn is so damned hot <3333

[shiroi-ten.livejournal.com]

soon it shall be more anatomically correct! xD thank you so much!